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My Final Fantasy by ~Falany:iconFalany:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Spoken Word


You are in every move I make
you, in every step I take
you killed my hopes, but filled my dreams
you are the thing that's hurting me.

You are the last thing I decide
to never lose out of my mind
you are the first thing I can see
when sleep comes washing over me.

You are the cruelty of my life
stabbing my heart without a knife
I know that you're not meant for me
even though I long you to be.

Your voice has never left my ears
your touch is what I hold the dearest
you are with who I want to be
you are my final fantasy.
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Author's Comments

I wrote this one after a guy I had a huuuuuge crush on said "you're too young for me. sorry but this is never gonna happen."
if there is something in life as love at first sight, I think this was it
and if it wasn't, then it was lust at first sight.

hope you like it

:heart:

Edit:
I changed one sentence in the last stanza
at first it said: you are the one i want with me
and now it says: you are with who I want to be

just figured it would flow more properly.

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=nouxz Aug 26, 2007, 11:09:07 AM
Sweet!
Well..sad, but sweet too.
I don't know, I feel like shouting Sweet!

But yeah, nice writing!!

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~xx-Mary-xx Aug 26, 2007, 12:07:49 PM
Aahw... so sad... I like someone too, but I pretend I'm not cause he said in kinda rough way that he doesn't like me... But he's kinda....weird... and vague...

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~zoetdropje Aug 26, 2007, 1:05:24 PM
heel erg mooi!

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If you fall, i'll catch.
If you love i'll love.
And so it goed my dear.
Don't be scared.
You'll be safe.
This I swear,
If you only loved me back.
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~Ademordna Aug 26, 2007, 3:08:36 PM
Oh, really good. I like it. Man, I know exactly what you mean.

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~Falany Aug 27, 2007, 2:55:32 AM
haha thanks =)
you're SWEET!!! too hun ^^

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lovely sentence
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~Falany Aug 27, 2007, 2:56:25 AM
weird+vague? seems like the perfect guy to me! :XD:
but ye, sorry that he doesn't like you... hope you didn't spill any tears over him cuz if he doesn't want you, he's just not worthy of you! :hug:

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
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~Falany Aug 27, 2007, 2:56:31 AM
dankje =)

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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~Falany Aug 27, 2007, 2:56:47 AM
thank you ^^

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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=nouxz Aug 27, 2007, 3:03:39 AM
:P

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