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Everything I'm just being me
you're not OK with that
you're just treating me
like I'm your little pet
That just felt so wrong
and it grew me strong
because of that,
a fight for life begun

Everyting in my mind is abused
Everything that i feel is for you
Everything that i hear isn't right
because of everything I'm to tired to live by this fight

I wont do anything
thats not true you know
I wont do anything because of you
you were in my heart
tearing me apart
just so you know
i'm not gonna live through

Everyting in my mind is abused
Everything that i feel is for you
Everything that i hear isn't right
because of everything I'm to tired
Autumn leaves fall on the ground
they are falling into pieces
within this holy night
were magick crafting eases

when i fall into darkness
when my life has to end
then she passes forward
with the life she had to lent

then i will be living
like i've never lived before
and then i will be missing
the life that they adore
Stories on a graveyard Wrists are open
tied to me
Our blood is flowing
to each others brief

We live a life
in this endless rain
And together
we feel our pain

You wished to go
I held you back
And now you're glad
that I did that

I had two ends
that I have seen
When you were dieing
in front of me

I could've chosen
to let you die
I would've broken
and only cry

Now I hold you
in my arms
You are my someone
who allways warms
a kiss goodbye i wanted to kiss you
all that time
but i didn't do it
thats my crime

you said you loved me,
you said you cared
now all i want to,
is not be scared

the time was right,
when daylight flew
away from us
cause that was new
we looked at each other
and then it grew

we are made for each other
to be alive
and be together
cause that is right

now we say goodbye,
under the moon
cause we both know,
that we won't meet soon

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My Final Fantasy

by ~Falany

You are in every move I make
you, in every step I take
you killed my hopes, but filled my dreams
you are the thing that's hurting me.

You are the last thing I decide
to never lose out of my mind
you are the first thing I can see
when sleep comes washing over me.

You are the cruelty of my life
stabbing my heart without a knife
I know that you're not meant for me
even though I long you to be.

Your voice has never left my ears
your touch is what I hold the dearest
you are with who I want to be
you are my final fantasy.
:iconfalany:
I wrote this one after a guy I had a huuuuuge crush on said "you're too young for me. sorry but this is never gonna happen."
if there is something in life as love at first sight, I think this was it
and if it wasn't, then it was lust at first sight.

hope you like it

:heart:

Edit:
I changed one sentence in the last stanza
at first it said: you are the one i want with me
and now it says: you are with who I want to be

just figured it would flow more properly.
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~Maanwezen Oct 16, 2007
Ahw! Beautifull but sad =( <3
Zelf heb'k zoiets nog niet meegemaakt, maar ik vind 't supererg
and looove you! *huggles*
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~Falany Oct 17, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
dankjeee!! :heart: :hug: :glomp:
en dankje voor de fav!

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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~Maanwezen Oct 20, 2007
you're welcome! =D
*Glomp!* (l)
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~Falany Oct 20, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
dat doe je tussen :
dus je doet : glomp : maar dan zonder spaties
zo dus!! :glomp:

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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~Maanwezen Oct 21, 2007
Hehe, dankje :P
ik vrees dat ik in het geheel niet met dA kan werken Dx
maar dus toch... :glomp: !
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~Falany Oct 22, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
^^ :hug:

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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~SakuraNarutoOi Aug 28, 2007
wish we could be there for you
very beautiful =)
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~Falany Aug 28, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
you got enough probs on ur own sweetshine :hug:

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"buildins burn, people die, but real love is forever" << the crow quote.
lovely sentence
my Icon is made by ~nikitt11!!!
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~SakuraNarutoOi Aug 28, 2007
yeyeye... we try not to discus it to much and just get over it our own way
i think solas might be torn up for the next few years...
well lets drop that now

X Athar <3
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~krijt Aug 28, 2007
Third line. It says 'my' twice. Also, I think it should say dreams. ;)

Other than that, this is quite a fabulous poem. Flows nicely, rhyming scheme's simple, yet nice.

Good job overall! I really liked reading this. ^_^

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"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
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